first studio crit.

in

ice melting into oil.

this is what came out. I'm not entirely happy, but not unhappy either. it's just that it relies too much on aesthetics, maybe? it's maybe too obvious, or maybe too straightforward?

posted by provolot on September 13, 2010 7:09 pm |
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